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Review:MajiKat says:
why have i not read this before now? hunny, this is amazing. i love this seedy, grimy world you have created. i tell you, the allusion is not unnoticed - what a terrible garden you have planted here. beautiful beautiful imagery!

okay so correct me if i am wrong, but i am assuming the Splintering refers to the collapse of the statute of secrecy? and the Diagon Alley is now home to the darker side of life? i could be wrong, but that is what i have read between your lines.

draco is fabulous! i think i am falling in love with him already. what amazing characterisation, and opening with his journal was an excellent move!

your language is beautiful - you know just how to wield words and paint wonderfully dark pictures. everyone in this is full-bodied - the waitress, the barmaid, the girls he chats to. they are minor, on the peripheries, but they are full characters.

this line: "She's tipping like a teapot in the hand of god and he waits nearby, ready to pour himself a cup." GAH! i love it! love it so much. what incredible metaphor and again, ties in nicely with the allegory running through this piece.

i owe you 5 reviews i think from the Sympathy challenge, but i will probably end up reviewing every chapter of this because it is amazing!!

Kate xx

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