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Review:wingsatmidnight says:
Lol, one word to describe this story..."sexy"

Seriously, I couldn't think of anything else. With all the 'tension' between Sadie and Malfoy and with the betting 10 galleons...

I like how this story is going. Grammar is great. Good paragraphs, the only problem is that it's a bit too long, so the reader might get a bit lost or something. Anyhow, that's not exactly a big important thing.

Can't wait until the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it. And sometimes the only reason my chapters are so long are because I start and stop with my writing instead of writing a chapter clear through, which is the case with the last chapter there. It took me about a week to a week and a half to to get it just that far and then I stopped. If I find a block of time to write nonstop, my chapters are generally shorter. :) Thanks for the critique though, I appreciate it! ~K :D

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