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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
This is so bitter-sweet! At first I was a little confused because it sounded at the start like it was going to be a sad memory when it was all happy which gave it a great sense of foreboding. I knew it was coming but I just so hoped it wasn't. Oh those stupid death eaters. ;P

The line that really got to me was 'A sound came from the very depths of his soul, the keen of a man who had lost his lifeís mate. It haunted that room forever more.' The noise in my mind is just so terrible and heart wrenching that it really shows how much it really hurts.

Overall, a great fic. The only thing I maybe would have liked to see a bit more was some of Win's personality. You get little tibits all over the place but maybe if you put a little more in there it would make the story a little more realistic.

Hugs!
(HPB/nikkinike/Nikki) :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it came out more angsty then I thought it would. It was supposed to be a nice wedding fic.

Thank you for your review! I will probably go back and fit in more of Win as much as I can without ruining the flow of it all . . . somehow.

Thank you again!


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