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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Linda! I'm here with your review. :)

You have a very interesting story coming here. Your characterizations of the next gen characters are very interesting. I have never seen Rose portrayed in such a way. It was a nice, different, and interesting change. You actually have me on the verge of hating her in this, which is what I hope you're going for if Dom is to have Scorpius at some point. I'm really interested as to see how you go about that.

This really was a great start to what could be an awesome fic. You portrayed the emotions of Dom excellently. I could feel her resentment for Rose, her irritation with the entire day and everything around her. It was mixed perfectly with the actions and descriptions of the day, making for a very nice flow.

I noticed it's been awhile since the post of this chapter, but I hope the second is posted soon. I would love to see where this goes. :) really awesome job! :)

Drue

Author's Response: Hello, there!

Thank you! I like to try to have a unique spin on the characters every now and again. I'm really glad that you've found that my portrayals of the characters are interesting and that my Rose was different from the other Rose's that you've encountered. Ha ha, yes. It's not necessary to hate her, but if you do - all the better because Dom will be the one who has Scorpius in the end.

I'm really pleased that you liked the beginning of this. I was hoping that the readers would get that vibe from Dom, and I'm really pleased that it went well with the flow.

It has been a while, and I was wondering if I should continue with this. There's been a lack of input and I wasn't sure if anyone would be interested, now that I know that there is indeed someone else that would very much like to continue I shall post more. I have four more chapters of this stored on my cpu to post before I have to start anew with new chapters.

Thanks so much for the lovely review!

♥
Linders

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