*hands a jar of tears over to Author* That's what happenned when i read this chapter... okay.. maybe not, but the only thing stopping me was the fact that I'm wearing mascara... But there's a giant lump in my throat. But that was a really really sad chapter. I think it's time that they hit a bump in the road. They didn't before. They have to now. So a short break- up period would make sense.
though as she has Sirius' baby, they kind of have to get back together soon. RIGHT?
But I guess the biggest question is HOW WILL THIS AFFECT THEIR SKILLS? Like obviously it will affect Sirius' skills, but Kylie is made of tougher stuff than that. I think she'll be fine, and very possibly step it up and be harder on herself because sh'es depressed. C'mon. Do that one, make her do that "I'm all right, it's okay. I'm stong. I'm moving on." when really she isn't, and she's depressed and lonely like mad. If you haven't gotten started on your next chapter already. ^.^
So, ALSO, when's that feather problem going to crop up? next chapter when they play their next game, or later? I would put the feather thing next, because then it will be like everything is just getting wose, and everyone knows everything gets worse before it gets better. C'mon... Don't you agree?
Remember to reply,
-Haylenie : )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
No, don't cry! I don't want tears, unless they're from laughing, in which case it's okay!
Go away, stupid lump - bother someone else!
I'm glad that you agree with the whole... issue, even though it's pretty rough to deal with.
Do I detect a threat in that RIGHT? Haha, just kidding... I think.
I'm kind of glad that you have absolutely no faith in Sirius whatsoever... though, going off of what we've seen in the past, he doesn't deserve much. I do like your idea, though that's kind-of-sort-of where I was going with it, but... partially. You'll have to see.
Unfortunately, if I told you when I was doing everything, I wouldn't be a very good author, so you'll have to wait on when I do what until the chapter gets posted. Patience is a virtue, but when you are blessed with none... well, I don't have any good words of wisedom for you ;P.
Dear, I shall always remember to reply - especially to a faithful reviewer like you!