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Review:charlottetrips says:
This section about Fred, Roxanne and Dom is amazingly written. The unspoken emotions and grief in these paragraphs is what I was looking for in the above with Teddy and Roxy—the small and insignificant details that people latch onto when caught up in their feelings and thoughts after a terrible disaster such as a family murder.

I liked how you made Dom a guy. Isn’t he normally a she? “Dominique”?

I’m convinced. The murderer IS Teddy! He’s so obsessed about becoming famous, calling these murders “perfect”, he’s selfish; it makes total sense!

Author's Response: I am a sucker for a well written grief/remorse/feeling awful scene. :P I'm ecstatic that this scene came off as well as it did. These are the emotions of family members still capable of selfless love (noticing who is missing from the lot hint hint) Dom is normally written as a girl, yes. But I had looked at JKR's family tree before I ever discovered fanfiction and assumed for whatever reason that Dom was male. As a little play on that, I always write him as such. I've still never written a female dom.

Thanks again!

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