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Review:leannemariesnape says:
Hi! leannemariesnape with your review!
I actually really enjoyed this! I had reservations when I saw in your request how short the story was, but you thoroughly changed my mind. You gave it a mysterious air, and it was if we were watching Harry from a distance.
I think that it is totally believable, as we know from the Rita Skeeter and the Prophet articles in the book that Harry doesn't handle publicity well at all. I think that he probably would just crumble.
You also portray how fickle fame can be- one second he was a hero, the next second, he was nothing. Very good.
I can't really find anything to say to improve. I know some people might say it needs to be longer and have more detail, but I like the detatched mysterious style of the story.
Very good ^_^
leanne

Author's Response: Thank you so much for responding so quickly.
It's kind of funny- I was orginally thinking of this for an english short story assignment before I realized how well it could (and does) suit Harry Potter.
I was trying to give it a (not exactly mysterious, but a good word too) distant air, almost like it's being viewed from afar. I'm glad that came across well.
I don't think I could lengthen the story by much anyways- I've already tried and it didn't seem to strengthen the story.
Thanks so much for your review!


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