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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi! Naida here with your requested review! First off, there's a small, but not very important detail you missed. It's impossible to get seventeen owls, even with a timeturner, because Howgwarts simply doesn't offer that many classes. Super minor, don't edit the whole chapter for it, but things like that just bug me, and probably me alone.

You specifically asked for feedback on your characters, so I'll start with that. I think Barty's characterization was perfect. he was cold and sinister, but at the same time, he was calm, and I think that fit him perfectly. He was also good with his words, and I definitely saw that in his character. I loved the "never alone" element you brought into it. It added a lot of flavor to your story.

Minerva's characterization was also very good. I think she was strong, and you did an excellent job of describing her emotions and reactions. I think you got a good insight into her character, and I love the addition of the explenation of the bone. Little things like that can really make a story for me, and yours definitely did that.

Overall. I think you have a well written story. It has an interesting plot, it's well worded, and you have a lot of little details that add a ton to your work. Great job and good luck on the challenge!

Author's Response: Naida, I'm so sorry that this took forever to reply to! I apologize! But here is my response to your FANTASTIC review!

First off, thank you so much for catching that. I didn't have GoF with me to look up the details at the time I wrote that scene, and I thought I knew the answer - but I have fixed it! Thank you!

Second off, thank you thank you thank you a million times over for all the brilliant compliments you've paid me! It's reassuring to know that I've accomplished my goal with two brilliantly different characters. It was VERY difficult writing their interaction and I was a little scared of how it turned out.

Thank you so much! :)

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