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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Hey! I'm sorry this review's taken so long to get up... I ended up being slammed with homework! But I'm here now. (:

I quite like Gracie. I love the way you opened this; I think it was original and really telling of what's to come. It was a really nice way to get us into the story.

I'm confused as what the relationship between everyone is. Is Gracie a Gryffindor? And why was she at the other table? Why is she friends with Remus but not Sirius? This might have been intentionally vague, but if it was, I'd try adding a bit more ambiguity to parts, as opposed to saying that she hated Black. I'm not sure, that just really confused me.

Other than that, though, this was really nice! I enjoyed it. (:

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