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Review:marissa lily potter says:
LOVVED IT! This was such a cute story. It made me go aw multiple times. I actually felt like crying because I was so happy with it. This was something completely different from what you usually write yet it worked. It was cute, it was emotional and it was of course, incredibly well written. This was such a great story to read. I could definitely read this story over and over again. Everything in here just worked out so well and the way you stick so well to canon without making it seem boring is a skill that is to die for. It's such an amazing skill to have and I am so happy with the way you integrate it into your stories.

One thing is that I wish that this story could go further. It looks like it has the potential to be a short story if it wanted to be but if you don't want to do that, then it's absolutely fine the way it is, as a one shot. I'm incredibly happy with this one-shot. It has to be one of the or the best one-shot I have ever read in my entire fanfiction reading experience. I salute you for writing this so well! :D

Author's Response: I think I'll leave it like this, though I might go back and edit it some more-- stretch it out a bit. However, I currently think it should end here. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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