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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
I was laughing so hard when this ended. Poor Percy. All I wanted was some attention from his wife for Merlin's sake. Though, I have to say that was quite funny and something Ginny would be apt to do. I can't imagine Percy swearing, but I can definitely see it happening in this situation.

Oh, and don't apologize for the lameness. I didn't find it lame, in the least. Sure, it may not have had a huge epic plot, but that doesn't make it lame. It was hysterical, if nothing else. I absolutely love this take on sending one's children off to school.

Usually, everyone writes Percy as the same prude that went to Hogwarts, studied studiously, and was ridiculously prim and proper. It's nice to see that Audrey's loosened him up a little bit.

Oh, and that thought of shacking up in every room of the house made me snort. Such a typical man in his way of thinking there, eh?

Ah well.

Like I've said your characterization of Percy was well done. I also quite liked Audrey and her concern for the girls. It was rather motherly, and of course, real. I think mother's worry over their children more than their father's, generally speaking. I know in some households it's vice versa.

Also your characterizations of Molly and Lucy were very nicely done. I really do like that he blackmails Molly into being nice to Molly (what a mean older sister), but I can also understand Molly's annoyance of having her little sister tail her everywhere.

And Lucy's concern that no one would like her was so adorable. How could anyone not like someone as cute as her?

Not to mention Ginny bursting through the floor interrupting his snogging. What are little sisters for, if not to annoy?

Also without any grammatical errors or spelling snafus this makes this piece even more awesome and infinitely not lame material. Shh, we'll pretend that made sense. Ha ha. Seriously, though, this wasn't lame.

Nicely done!


Linders

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