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Review:Trundlebug says:
Good chapter. You needed to keep at Tom's purpose, because he wouldn't be the sort to dawdle on it. As far as it being too early, it never really is. Just because he knows about it doesn't mean he can access it easily. And even if he can, there's bound to be greater difficulties down there than were mentioned in Book 2. I am sure that Salazar Slytherin would have safeguards in place, just in case.

Tom is his usual, scheming self, brought to life well under your hand. I really like Amaya too, and think that there is a lot left beneath her surface, more than you've so far doled out anyway. I look forward to learning more about her, and am particularly intrigued by her lack of certainty where Tom Riddle is concerned. She's a very fleshy character and I think the juxtaposition of her crush/obsession and Tom's search/obsession could make for a very interesting story.

At any rate, I look forward to reading more, and I give you a 10 for the bravery to play your cards so early. I myself hold far too much back and string people along a bit too much (Dumbledore's curse, I'm afraid). But you do well to come out with that tidbit. Knowing a goal doesn't make acquiring it any easier. Good story, I'll stay tuned!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, I have a couple chapters planned for Tom before he ever gets in, so I see what you're saying with that. I never actually thought about extra safegaurds, so I'm glad I got this review now! I'll definitely add that in! Thanks again!

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