Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:ShelbyBlack says:
*hugs* Hey lovely! I'm here for your long overdue review, sorry about that :3

I actually read this ages ago, but hadn't had the actual time to discuss everything I wanted too! The first time I read it, I cried hehe! Wow...this is totally awesome!

I absolutely LOVE the storyline, it's so original and unexpected! Where to start? I think this is such a believable story, definitely something that I could see happen! You've picked "adolescence" as your first criteria, you have done an excellent job as conveying this issue throughout the story.

"I won't tell anyone what you did. I won't humiliate you. But if you ever tell anybody what I did that first night, I will never talk to you again." This absolutely broke my heart! The things girls will go through for love, for somewhere to be there...you've displayed the characteristics of being a teenager very subtly and nicely :3

I get all giggly when I read this, which in my case is a good sign when reading HPFF (means I'm enjoying it)

THE QUOTE *flails* This is another story! WOW! This is the first one that was submitted that had it in the actual dialogue. It was so nice to read, I love that like the others you've not only used the quote but understood what it's conveying! The way you've put this in your story is brilliant. I practically had a fit when I saw it! It fits so so well!

Love, thank you so much for this entry! I loved it!
xoxox

Author's Response: Don't worry! :3
Wow, you cried?!!! Thank you! :D
Thank you :) As soon as I got the quote, I knew I had to do an affair story :)
Awwh, I'm glad you think I showed her as a teenager!
YAY :D
Thank you :)
AH ALL I'M SAYING IS THANK YOU BUT THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW!! :D x


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 280
Submit Report: