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Review:charlottetrips says:
Aw, man. That was bittersweet. It really makes you think about what you do and say to others. Not wanting harsh and unkind words to be your last. Never leave an upset alone for too long, I say.

The apology was heart-wrenching, though the bits where Lily's need to be right were annoying but completely human and so needed in there.

The only thing I would fix is capitalize "Dad" and "Daddy" as they are used as titles here.

You told a story of beautiful sadness. Thank you.

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really happy that her emotions in such a moment of sadness came across. You never get someone back, and in this moment, Lily realises all that she lost, but now it is too late and she will never get it back.

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