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Review:justonemorefic says:
Huh! That was unexpected! xD

Somehow I imagined some Lord Byron, lounging in the bushes with his ladyfriend muse and out come two tramps a-tromping. Or at least, that's the image I got. Oh those romantic poets. I think your narrator Lee here is one.

I think some people mentioned it before, it was a bit of a quick shift. I didn't expect it, certainly (that invisible lover). It's an interesting concept, but I think it needs a little more transition there. It does feel like two different stories almost. I think adding some clever description and some repetition might help :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! When I have some more time I will look back over this. Thanks for the review though.

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