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Review:Jenna822 says:
So, I had finished reading this on my phone and when I was looking back through my reviews, I realized I'd never come and left the reviews for it. :(

It's been a bit since I read it, so I skimmed through to refres myself. I rather liked Molly. She seemed a bit like her father only without the attitude about it. I think the scene with James and Ella coming out of the room all dishelved was brilliant. It was a good way to show that their relationship was growing without writing it all out and making this more of a romance, which I know you've said you wanted to avoid. So I think you did a great job there!! Molly was spot on, of course. :) --Jenna

Author's Response: This is really weird :P I was skimming reviews last night and noticed you hadn't got around to leaving them yet. Bang, next day, here you are. It's so strange!

I think most of these minor characters are a bit similar to one another, really. I'd not normally characterise Molly in this way but it worked for the small cameo she received, I think.

I'm really glad you pointed out the development of James/Ella and the (hopefully) subtle way I tried to do it. I really didn't want to be flashing 'JAMES/OC HERE' in people's faces, since as I've said, that's never been the story's aim. I still feel like a bit of a sell-out for making her even into this minor role.

Thank you so much, Jenna. Your reviews are amazing.

xx

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