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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Oh my god, this was such a sad story! Yet, at the same time, I loved every word. I think you explored a very different side of the Potter family, a side where everything is not perfect, and I loved that.

Lily's raw emotion was so tangible. Even without all the crying, I would have been able to feel the pain because of the words you used. It was real to me, and you made me feel, which I think is probably the hardest thing to do in a story. If you've made me feel, I know that your story was excellent.

I really liked the side of Harry you produced. It's strange to think of him as not believing in his daughter's dream, but at the same time, I can see why he'd want her to get good grades and play Quidditch. I didn't like this side of Harry, but it made sense at the same time, and in the context of your story, it was perfect.

Your writing, I've said it before and I will say it again, is strongest in your descriptions and your ability to make me feel. Another amazing story, 10/10.

Author's Response: Wow, this is an amazing review. Thank you thank you thank you!!! I tried so hard to get Lily's pain across in this story and I'm so happy that you could feel what I was trying to portray.

I love Lily II and i think of all the Potter children, life would be hardest for her, being the youngest of three. Harry would be like every parent, wanting the best for their children, it's just in this case, poor Lily perceived things so differently to her dad.

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