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Review:SearchingForLuna says:
This is quite an interesting start to the story!

I love your characterization of Sirius. He's got a bit of that wild, untamed side that often defines him; but what I really like is that you saw that methodical side of him that helped him carry out his plan to get into Hogwarts. Neville is also very nicely and humorously done :) His bravery with Sirius really foreshadows his bravery in the last books.

Aside from a few grammatical errors that are easily overlooked (I'm just picky), your story flows wonderfully and has great description!

Great job!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am so glad that people are commenting on my characterizations. I spent waaay too much time obsessing over them and am glad to see the fruits of that.

Thanks for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it.

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