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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hello! Naida here with your requested review! Can I just start out by saying awww! Even though this wasn't a romantic relationship, it has to be one of the sweetest things I have ever read! I loved it! You portrayed the relationship between Ron and Harry perfectly. My favorite line was, without a doubt, "Then children, probably with names that mirror ours or something ridiculous like that.". I had to stop reading from laughing so hard!

In terms of believability, I think you were spot on. Ron and Harry were most definitely in character. Harry's always been the more open one to me, and Ron gets embarrassed easily, but his heart is in the right place. And his reaction: Classic Ron! It was exactly what I think he would have said if it was part of the books!

Your flow was good too, apart from the end, when I got a bit confused as to how Hermione and Ginny suddenly came into the picture. Were they there the whole time? Did Ginny tell Hermione? And if so, how did they know where Ron and Harry were? You don't really even need a lead in, just a sentence of dialogue saying something like "Ginny just told me!" or something to that effect.

Other than that, amazing one-shot, really! Never before did I think a non romantic relationship could make my heart melt as much as a romantic one! Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry I thought I had replyed to this! So glad you got it was supposed to be cute in a different way than romantic!

Hehehe I'm glad you liked that, I always thought that was stupid and so not Ron's idea (though for me Albus later does the same!). So glad I got Ron right, I was so worried about him!

Ooops, yeah at the start I think I said, Ginny and Harry split up to tell Ron and Hermione separately, then Hermione wanted to see Harry :) I should fix that, sorry about the confusion!

Aww thanks!

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