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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
I really enjoyed this chapter. It gave a lot of insight into Dom's background and personality. You can really see how much she hates certain aspects of her life and that she has a serious attitude. The perosnality you display in Hogwarts is very self degrading and leads itself to where she now finds herself.

While there isn't alot of action in the chapter, I still found it quite engaging as there was a lot of characterisation in it. The chapter was also a good length I'm you didn't bog the reader down with too many details about the other characters just yet. Everything you mentioned was from Dom's memories.

The chapter flowed well and I liked its pace. You explained enough without dragging things out. I also enjoy your style of writing and you have really captured Dom's dark mood within it. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :) I'm glad you liked the characterization, because that's really one of the biggest parts of this. Thanks for the kind words, it means a lot to me! (:

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