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Review:justonemorefic says:
:O I am so confused in a good way.

"It is a shame that you killed him first." Metaphorically, I'd imagine... I think. But the rotting corpse too *___* It makes me feel so morbid to be so drawn to their relationship to know what happened and what's happening now. And your PoV makes me feel like I'm some sort of accomplice, which I think lends a nice effect!

Victoire really is unearthly. The way she speaks and holds herself, it does feel like someone who isn't meant to last. And the very last bit -- "For a second - before you press your lips to mine - I think I can hear the sound of bones breaking." Big shudder.

Your angst ♥

Author's Response: Mwahaha, AMBIGUITY STRIKES!

Yes -ahem- metaphorically. Not at all true. Victoire is a bit crazaaay. She's obsessed with her own and other's immortality - hence the obsession with killing herself and others. She thinks she is an angel. She looks like one, Teddy treats her like one. She obviously doesn't fit anywhere on earth. And yes, I love writing in second person - it's so hard with the tenses and the feel, but it's great fun.

She mental, that one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you like my angst. ♥

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