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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Ah, so Nicky's suspicions were right. I had a sneaking suspicion that Vic was, too, but she was being positively daft about it. Good to see that I was right, too.

Ha ha.

Your flow and pacing seemed to be just right. Nothing seemed jarringly out of place or rushed.

Your characterizations were beautiful. I love how Scorpius just appears out of nowhere and they snog senselessly for a while. He is really rather sweet and endearing if only a bit oblivious. Dom and Scorp are so cute together.

I do hope that things between Nubia and Freddy get better, though.

I don't know what to think of Claire. On one hand she's highly amusing, but I think someone of her personality would get very vexing after a while.

As far as grammar and spelling go I didn't pick up on anything that needed ammending.

Great job! I really love this story.

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Linders! Oh my gosh, it's been forever! I'm so glad to see you around HPFF again!

Yeah, Nicky was right! Vic is positively daft, and as you'll see, she'll have a bit of a reason for being that way.

Also Dom/Scorp and Fred/Nubia for the win! Nubia will definitely be making a huge comeback within the next few chapters.

Thanks so much for the review! :D

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