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Review:Snapdragons says:
This was wonderfully sweet and adorable - plus, how could I resist when the first chapter was called Snapdragon? :P Heh.

I loved your depictions of James and Lily in this. They were true to what I'd imagine them to be - only younger, and more innocent, but the seeds were planted (oh look, a gardening metaphor) for who'd they be when they grew up, if that makes sense.

The idea of the barking snapdragons made me laugh - such a James thing to do, and it really would be quite funny. I enjoyed his lighthearted innocence and also, the hinting of his relationship with Sirius - how much they explored, how he wanted to find a way to get to Hogsmeade...

Him knowing that he had to save Lily because of fairytales was really sweet - you displayed their emotions wonderfully and it was quite believable.

Some of my other favorite parts included the little comment with the jam, how Lily was both flattered and angry - truly, only girls could pull that off! haha -, and that final touch of mentioning how Lily always kept the snapdragon.

Your characterization was impeccable and it was lovely to see James and Lily when they were young. A wonderful job - perfect for brightening days! :)

Author's Response: Heh, that's the awesomest thing ever! I review by Snapdragon for Snapdragon! I am really glad you like the characterizations of James and Lily because I took a lot of effort into making them behave like (still) children and especially children that are about to grow into the adults we know them as. Thanks for the super sweet and lovely review!

P.S. Nice gardening metaphor, I loled. xD


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