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Review:Trundlebug says:
Good stuff from you, as always.

Harry's the same old Harry, just a little more mature (I think most of us guys never grow up completely). Little James is so much like Harry, with a healthy dose of Fred & George, of course. Very likable story about the passing down of a family artifact--bit better than a pocketwatch too!

I only so one error in the writing that I thought I'd tell you about (I like people to tell me). Its in the last sentence of the
first paragraph in italics, the verb is mis-conjugated. Barely worth mentioning.

I liked it a lot, and enjoy all of your fanfiction that I have so far read. Keep on entertaining us!

Author's Response: Thanks Trundlebug! :)

I had trouble writing adult Harry, but I loved writing James. I see him as a loud kid but with a lot of Fred, George & Ginny in him. :)

Thanks for mentioning that. I always want people to tell me about my mistakes too, so I'm really glad you did.

I'll definitely be writing more when exams are over. Keep reading! ;)

-Sophia x

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