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Review:leannemariesnape says:
Hello
I could have sworn that I did a review for this. Especially sinse I know what the review said... anyway.

The paring of Yaxley/Umbridge was done very well! It was enjoyable and subtle (Something we all probably need in a Yaxbridge pairing, lol)
You give a very good insight into Yaxley's world. I enjoyed that he argued that he was the most important death eater- discarding Thicknesse and Snape...
The "Can't you do something that isn't pink?" Line made me smile. That is exactly how I think people would react to Umbridges pink obsession.
I also like how they are trying to work out what the trio are going to do. You show the confusion that the ministry have at this time. :)
Not really any areas for improvement, in my opinion.
Good Job :)
Leanne

Author's Response: I double checked before I requested one but I was pretty sure you hadn't.. and you hadn't but you have now! xD

I figured he probably would argue he was the best.. he is a Death Eater after all and I thought it might be in his nature.. especially with how proud he seemed with the fact that he had imperiused Thickness in that very beginning scene at Malfoy Manor in DH.

I had to put something pink hatred related in! I can't imagine Yaxley being a fan of the colour.. I don't think anyone else could either and I like writing humour.. so had to put it in.

Thanks so much for the lovely review :) X


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