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Review:Akussa says:
Hi!

I found this really well written and it gave me a great big smile to start my day! I enjoyed the pace and the way you went back and forth in the narrative didn't feel ackward at all; it all flowed nicely.

The second half of the story was a bit aharder to read though. There are so many formatting mistakes (pieces of dialogue written without spacing; spacing between sentences in the wrong place; no spacing after a period and the beginning of a sentence...) you deinitly need to have a second look at it.

It is such a nice little moment, so well written and emotionnaly spot on, just check back the formatting and you will deinitly have a great, great story in your hands, Congrats!

Akussa

Author's Response: Aww thak you!

Ugh so sorry about formatting, I seem to never get that right. I'll edit, don't worry!

Thanks so much for the thoughtful review!


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