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Review:justonemorefic says:
Eeep! Hattie, what lovely words you use. I'm terrified already.

God, this relationship feels so unhealthy in both ways but captivating all the same, because I can feel the emotion running through him. Victoire being this beautiful girl who seems to always get what she wants but then also, Teddy seems like a bit of an unreliable narrator.

I love love how you did the transformation. The fact that you wrote him running down the streets for so long and I didn't even notice! I saw all the streetlamps-fog-black-and-white sort of stuff one typically sees ;D

"That was a little white lie." THIS is the line that gave me chills. I was like ooo he is so out for something, but in a shuddery-GAH-WHAT'S-HE-COMING-FOR way. And then of course, everything after it that just adds onto the OMG.

♥ Lovely lovely, but you know I'd expect no less from you.

Author's Response: OH HAIII GINA! ♥

Well, you know me. I have a thing for rain and body counts and angst in immeasurable quantities.

They are both monsters. Victoire has Veela blood in her, as well as her father having some werewolf symptoms. In short, they are both monsters. His is more instinctive - the werewolf cannot control his own actions like when he is in his human form - whereas Victoire is much more a praying mantis/black widow sort of a girl. Vicious, manipulative. A cow. I think that's why they clung to each other, in a way.

Glad you liked it, Ginaaa ♥

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