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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Aw, Albus is so sweet. I love him for being such a sweetheart to Nancy.

Scorpius's: “Why are you a Slytherin?” line literally made me laugh out loud. Poor Jack. I can't imagine that it would be fun to have Scorpius and Al as roommates. I think I would probably go crazy if they were mine.

Your characterization, flow, and banter all seemed to flow well. Nothing seemed jarringly out of place.

I like that in this chapter Nancy let Albus comfort her. It was adorable that she actually trusted him enough to confide in him. I feel so terrible about White said to her, though. If I was one of her gal pals, I would have knocked his teeth down his throat. Just saying.

I didn't pick up on any grammatical or spelling errors so kudos there! :)

Nice work!

I can't wait to see how this ends!

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I really, really enjoy writing anything that involves Scorpius - yet, I always seem to write him with the wit.
I'm glad that you've noticed that fact about Jack being in a hard position. Most have simply commented that it would be a great laugh rooming with the two boys. :D
I quite like your method of dealing with White, I actually fully agree with you too. Yet, hopefully Albus' methods will meet your approval :P I wasn't too sure when writing it, so I hope you liked it.
Thank you again!

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