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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Buhahaha! I love Albus. I seriously wanted to hug him so many times in this chapter. White and Bambi are an item then? How disappointing. I really don't like White. He seems like such a sodding tosser.

Then again, it isn't as if Albus were the king of decorum and proper conduct. However, I can't help but have an affinity for the poor boy.

Constantly being called illiterate and not being trusted with books would be quite a disheartening experience.

As always, I enjoyed the banter, and your characterizations. This continues to be a fun piece.

As far as spelling and grammar are concerned, I did pick up on one error: I assured him that it blended in with the blood but he refused. It's just an incomplete thought. I think most people knew what you meant, you might just want to fix that.

I didn't pick up on any other errors, though.

Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next.


Author's Response: Haha. Albus just seems to always be in the right place at the right time. I am sure he would happily return your hugs.
White and Bambi are an item as far as White is concerned ... Bambi, not so much.
He may be a tosser; but I really, really like his name.
Can I please just let you know, that reading 'Then again, it isn't as if Albus were the king of decorum and proper conduct.' really made me smile. You're brilliant.
Thank you again. I will fix the errors that you've found and I hope that you've enjoyed the next two chapters!

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