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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Oh my god, I haven't reviewed anything in such a long time! I hope that I haven't forgotten how to do it. xD

You know, I have always been very fascinated with Tom Riddle stories. They have that dangerous appeal, but in my opinion are really really hard to write plausibly! Up to now, you've written everything well, though, effectively outlining Tom's only (and very fervent) interest with the CoS. Amaya seems interesting too and I am glad that you didn't do the cliche "from a long line of Slytherins but sorted in Gryffindor". Yes, there was some thought on it from the Sorting hat, but indeed old habits die hard. It's important how her character will develop from now on though - that we get an insight into the real her and not just leave her a two-dimensional character with an obsession with Tom Riddle. I guess I'll see that in the future chapters. ;)

Anyway, all in all, a good beginning of the story. You write very well and you made me care for your characters which in my opinion is a crucial thing in all stories. I enjoyed it and I will be back. xD

Maya

Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much! I think I'll be able to develop her a bit more, but thanks for the advice and the review!

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