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Review:SilentConfession says:
Hey! I really liked this, it was so incredibly beautiful! I loved that beginning sentence! Did you write that yourself or were you given that as a quote? Anyway, i also loved you tied the ending in with the beginning, it really brought everything that Marlene was feeling about this situation.

What you have here is so incredibly powerful and describing how he's manipulated her into feeling the way she does. Also, the fact that he killed her in the end just gave me shivers throughout reading this short little interlude. I loved how you wote Marlene and her character feel so complete in with such a short story!

There are just so many lines in the short piece that i adore and i can't really focus on any one. I especially loved the whole i love you, i hate you, i want you, and i need you. I thought i was so beautiful and summed up this whole story of guilt and remorse quite well. Anyway, very interesting premise you have here, great job portraying this so well! 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to review I"m glad you enjoyed it. No I have actually wrote it myself so it wasn't given to me. Well I'm glad you liked that because if I remember correctly there were some other readers who didn't.

Thank you so much you really made me giddy and blush. Yeah and I agree with you he did sort of manipulate her but he's a Slytherin so that probably explains why. But once again glad you enjoyed it .

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa


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