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Review:charlottetrips says:
I loved the stalker comment! In addition to being a sucker for the shy quiet types getting louder and more self-confident, I'm also a sucker for the love/hate relationship! So you're story is currently my cup of tea!

I like that you give Sirius his devil-may-care attitude but with a streak of goodness in him. That was definitely the young Sirius in my eyes.

The set-up of needing to work together for two weeks sure can be a bit cliche but if it works for you, then do it!

Overall, the characters are coming together nicely. (Do I see a possible flirtation between Remus and Lily?)

I'm definitely keeping my eye on this one!

x Char

Author's Response: I'm glad that my story is your cup of tea! The stalked comment was completely me so I couldn't help but add it in there :)

I try to write him as realistic as possible and that's how I always saw him in my eyes too!

I really was hesitant to add the two weeks thing, but I gave in. I needed them to start off somewhere and I figured it would be there. Though I'll try not to make it a big thing like others do.

I did notice that I was writing some almost flirting between Remus and Lily (which isn't what I was going for, though I might just go with it) though, of course, she'll end up with James in the end.

I'm glad you like my story and I really appreciated your comments and reviews! They've certainly helped me think about a couple things I can fix and tweak here and there. Thanks a billion :)


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