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Review:charlottetrips says:
I am liking Hayley!! She's not perfect and confident but shy. I love people like this (I think I've mentioned before) who go from being insecure into having a better viewpoint of themselves and those around them.

I like the interaction of the characters so far. It's pretty believable.

Just a note, remember that the Marauders were in school in the 70's. Some of the dialogue or inner monologue here can come off as too modern.

I'm really liking where you are going with this so far! Onward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh I didn't think of that. I'll have to do some research on how they spoke in the 70's. Thanks :)

I'm so glad you like Haley, I really want the readers to connect with her you know? I really want this to be as realistic as possible so I'm glad that you think they're realistic so far.

Thanks again for another awesome review !:)

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