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Review:charlottetrips says:
Very intrigued. I always go for the quiet, not quite popular girl getting the hot popular guy. Such a complete sucker for those.

The way you started it out was very bold, already letting us know that the girl we're about to read about and probably love is going to die. Although this leaves me with the question of how is she telling the story? :P

Your sense of humor is coming out here and I like that. With such a grim end to look forward to, the humor leavens that.

There were a couple spelling and grammatical things in this one but I'm sure you can clean that up.

On to the next chapter!

x Char

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I admit, I didn't think about how she would be telling the story, I'll be sure to address that at the end of the story. Maybe I can do something where it comes to a close and it's just her speaking.

I try to add some humor in it, I don't want it to be depressing the entire read. I'm glad you noticed :)

I'll have to go through the chapter once more and see if I can catch the couple mistakes I made :)

Thanks again!


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