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Review:TallestTower says:
HPFF seemed to put my last review in it's big rumbly belly, so here we go, review number two! I love the switch to Lucy's narrative. It works so well and feels right, the way you've led into it is perfect. Her tone is brilliant, it really sounds like someone pleading her innocence, with all her implications of Harvey's guilt... it makes both of them suspicious, so although she's acting innocent, she seems guilty too. Lovely the way it's written.
Another thing I really loved was how she noticed the little details about Harvey, how he leaned forward on his elbows... really great touch and it just seems to show how memorable his visits were to her. It's already very exciting, can't wait to read on! x

Author's Response: Haha, it's big rumbly belly? Silly Helena. :P

I'm glad you like the switch of Lucy's perspective. I think it would have been boring any other way, as it would have been just dialogue, which although this is technically dialogue, doesn't necessarily read like it. And yay, they both seem guilty. Hahah. I hope it's not leaning too far one way or the other.

Thank you so much for the review, hun!

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