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Review:silverstarletworld89 says:
Why are you doing this to me?!?! I don't understand, what did Victorie do? Why is she so mean 'And you did. Tossed me aside when I fulfilled my purpose.' I need answers my friend!!!
(I am adding this to my favourites and I really want to see how this plays out and so I FINALLY GET SOME ANSWERS!! ok, I am calm lol =p)

Once again like your first chapter, the descriptions/characteristics of Teddy are wonderful, I really do feel for him. Btw am I supposed to like Victorie by any chance? Because I don't lol, she seems heartless.


“What do you want to be?”

“Ugly,”

Enough said.

You have give us a deeper glimpse into their relationship, but it still isn't enough for me I am afraid I need more!! So I can fully understand the dynamics. So Teddy is on his way to turn Victorie into a werewolf because she is a cow? Am I on the right track? Gah I am so confused but I LOVE this story, it is soo different and unique. And it is weird because at this moment they both seem to me like monsters. The way you have characterised them both (to me) Victorie being an evil so-an-so and the way you have portrayed Teddy it's like he is going after blood (I don't know if any of that made sense you to but erm yeah =D)

GREAT STORY!! And I look forward for more
Silverstarletworld

Author's Response:
Aahaha, sorry about that! I love ambiguity, so I thought I'd go a bit mental with it. No names. No nothing. Just excess amounts of flowery language and annoyingly pretentious choppy sentences and Roman numerals and repeated, italicised sections. Heh, apparently you like it.

Those quotes are some of my favourites, too. :P

I wanted to play with lycanthropy, if you can. Lupin was scared in DH that he might pass the condition onto Teddy, so I played around with that. Victoire has Veela blood in her, as well as her father having some werewolf symptoms. In short, they are both monsters. His is more instinctive - the werewolf cannot control his own actions like when he is in his human form - whereas Victoire is much more a praying mantis/black widow sort of a girl. Vicious, manipulative. A cow.

Thanks so much for your lovely comments and for reading and reviewing! :D


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