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Review:SilentConfession says:
HI! I've finally come for the promised review! Thank you so much for entering my challenge, i really like this first chapter and how it has turned out.

I really liked the description and how it all flowed really nicely together. I'm really attached to this Pomona in your story she seems very sweet and kind of like a bit of an outsider in her family. I don't know if you wanted her to be that way, but that's what it felt like, i don't think this is bad though. I really like Henry though and his brotherly attitude toward Po, i really liked the connection you have between them, i think it's really sweet.

I never really thought too much about her home life and i think it's interesting that you've made her parents a little unsupportive of her herbology love.

I felt though that the end was really quick and i felt like i was missing something. The quote felt a little forced to me as well and i think it could have been integrated into it a little more and if the ending was reworked a little i think it could be quite brilliant. 9/10 =D great job!

Author's Response: you're welcome! it was a good one :)
i'm glad that you liked it! i understand what you mean about the quote...my life is so crazy but i want to go back and fix this--lucky for me your challenge deadline is pretty generous so i will be able to go back and work it in better :)
thanks so much for the review, i love knowing what you liked about it.
also, yes, i did mean for pomona to feel like an outsider :)
thanks for the review!!

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