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Review:Dalek194 says:
Hi DB, I saw your status update and decided to review... and I'm really glad I did! It was really refreshing in every way - for one thing you had Scorpius with Dom rather than Rose, which makes it more interesting. Love the banner, by the way... I often see Karen in banners, but I've never seen her with Matt! ;-)

The grammar was very good, but (as I'm really fussy - sorry LOL) I spotted a few tiny things;

- "I'm technically aloud to start dating" (aloud should be allowed)

- "we she began to read" (we should be when)

- At the start, you have Dom reading Witch Weekly magazine. Then Rose gets out her copy, but then Dom yanks it out of her hand as if she hasn't seen it yet; hasn't she got her own copy?

Sorry, I'm really fussy LOL These are only tiny things, and the story as a whole is really great work. I'm lovin' the humour side to it (Batman and Robin! Ha ;-D) and the end is just too funny.. great work! I feel this could be a potential platform to a whole story, or at least another one-shot, but if you want to leave it here it still works fine. Really good job, well dome!

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