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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
So very sorry this has taken me so long to get to. Real life has managed to thwart my reading/reviewing efforts for some time now. But, I am here finally!

This is definitely a lovely piece of writing. The attention to detail is superb. I absolutely love the first few paragraphs in which Sirius is enthralled with seeing everything in such stark clarity.

Of course, I do adore that while Sirius is in Epiphany he has retain much of his former self in the transition. While it aggravates poor Ruby, it was nice to see as a reader. His curiosity is wonderful. And while Ruby may have said curiosity killed the cat, I'm afraid his may kill her (or drive her batty).

Anyway, lovely piece of writing, and I will try to get back to reading the second chapter. But it may take time.

Len

Author's Response: No need to apologize, the time on this response is pretty awful in itself. Ah, real life...such a pest. Glad you could make it, though!

I'm so glad about Sirius. He's my favorite, so I didn't want to lose his essence within the AU genre. Sort of the canon character, thrown into something totally non-canon. That's what I was going for, at least.

Thank you so much Len, I really appreciate the review!


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