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Review:Dalek194 says:
Aww; a nice little one-shot that made me smile ;-) It's a good concept, and one you handled well; James's enthusiasm, disregard for any sort of rules (LOL ;-D) and sheer childish (in a good way) wonder and joy at getting his letter. Nice job.

Your beta did a very good job, but I did spot one tiny thing;

- "Didnít you have enough sense to clean yourself off before tracked mud every where!" (shouldn't it be "before you tracked mud everywhere"?) I haven't heard of the expression tracked before either, in this context... but that's probably just me. Also, there's a massive gap between the words "School" and "of" in the start of his letter.

On the whole, a nice little one-shot that captures the excitement of recieving a letter perfectly, as well as giving a nice and realsitic portrayal of a young James's personality. Nice work! ;-)

Author's Response: Aw thank you! :) I'm off to fix those things right now :)

I really wanted to make him true to character as possible and I'm glad you think I did it.
Thank you :)

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