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Review:Secret Stag says:
Dumbledore's reaction was a little off, he seemed way to happy given the circumstance. But as for your questions, the conservation was good but I prefer to remain my attention on action rather than description.

Author's Response: He was happy that they were back, and he didn't realize the true extent of the danger that Harry was in, Severus sent off his patronus and told him that they were trapped in the cave by the storm and he was helping Harry recover, Dumbledore didn't know about the bronchitis, and since he really trusts Snape, figured everything would be okay with Snape looking out for Harry.

I tend to see Albus as an eternal optimist, I mean look at how he reacted during the Sorcerer's Stone incident. Harry wakes up after nearly dying and there's good old Al, smiling and pointing out how many sweets and cards he's gotten and only after a few minutes does he mention the fact that Harry nearly died, very calmly, like students nearly die everyday in the school fighting off dark wizards.

Glad you liked the conversation, it was a necessary part of the story to further their relationship, and more action will be coming soon.


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