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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
This was quite beautiful! I really enjoy your works and this was no exception.

The imagery and description you manage to convey almost has a poetic feel to it, and it makes the story all the more enjoyable to read.

As far as characterizations go, I think you were spot on with Remus. There are so many times in this piece that I just wanted to hug him, but I think that's reminiscent of Remus. His life was filled with so much angst that you just want to hug him and tell him everything will be all right.

I also particularly enjoyed the fact that you made him have a girlfriend before Tonks because it seems a bit more realistic than a thirty something male never having a girlfriend in his life before he ends up married.

As far as grammar and spelling goes, I didn't pick up on any errors; but I didn't really expect to. Your pieces are generally devoid of errors, which is nice.

So, overall, I would like to say - good job!

You may have given us only snapshots of Remus' life, but when they all come together you have a clearer picture.

Not to mention, I like how you've used the phases of the moon to describe what was going on in his life, at the time. It's an original idea that I don't think I've seen anyone else attempt it before.


Linders

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really nervous about writing Remus so it means a lot to me that you liked my characterization of him. His life really was unfairly angsty...poor bloke ): As for the lack of errors, I have an amazing beta to thank for that, but thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed this so much!

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