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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
That. Was. Amazing. The mystery to it! I loved it! I'm honestly speechless right now. It was just incredible. The writing you did was so descriptive. You didn't tell me a story: you showed it to me. You painted a picture in my mind with words. It's honestly as good as some published novels I've read. What was amazing to me, was that this wasn't a very long chapter. It was precise, and to the point, yet it gave me just as much background information as a 6000 word first chapter, and it gave it to me well. I am so intruiged by this plot. I can't believe I've never read one of your stories, because this was just excellent. You have a talent.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely, lovely comments. I was really worried about posting this story: it's so completely different from anything I've ever written. Usually I focus more on the plot and, even though I think it's important that the story is well written, writing style usually takes second place. I wanted to try something different. In this story, the plot and writing are so closely interwoven, because I wanted to make Teddy's narration as realistic as possible. It's a lot short, choppy sentences because the rhythm flows wells with the way he's running, and he's obvo thinking of Victoire, so there's some flashbacks/memories thrown in as well.

Really, thank you so much. You made my day.

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