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Review:SeverusSnape15 says:
Hello, I'm so sorry it took me so long to get here, but Sev here with your review:
I'm SO glad that your wrote about Percy! I haven't seen a Percy story in a so long, so I was very interested in this.

I didn't see any spelling, nor grammar errors, so great job on that part!

I love how you interpreted some dialogue here and there. This story could have gone without dialogue all together and I don't think it would have been as good. I love that part.

One thing I have to point out. I'm almost certain(I could be wrong, if I am, sorry!) that Bill's real name is William. :) Just so you know.

You wrote Percy VERY canon which also excites me. You did a great job for this being one of your first third persons in a long time. Write more! You're great at it! If you need anymore reviews, I'm always here :)

Author's Response: Hello! It's quite alright! I understand life gets in the way sometimes ;) No harm done.

Thank you for all of your praise and comments! I really do appreciate it! I'm glad you liked Percy's personification, and thank you so much for having confidence in my third-person! I much prefer first-person but that was a huge compliment to hear!

Oh! Thank you for catching that! I'll change it the first moment I have time! :)

Again, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review! I appreciate it!

- Ginni

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