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Review:The Last Marauder says:
I said I'd read your story and review so here goes! WOW. I've read so many fics that just make me cringe (and make me want to give up reading fanfiction), because they get characters so badly wrong. I mean, I usually find, strangely with Sirius more than other characters, that fic-writers make him do things Rowling's Sirius wouldn't and they make him say things Rowling's definately wouldn't either. Makes me cringe. But this, wow, I'd say you're spot on. You really had Sirius's idiolect down to perfection and I was really impressed by that (as I so rarely see it). The only criticism I can make was that I wished this fic were longer. Ha, really well done and I ain't lying either. It was really well written, flowed really well and you got Sirius's character 100% right. I was really pleased too at how well you blended humour into this piece. That's a really hard thing to do. This made me laugh and made me feel twangs of sadness. You got the balance perfect. I can see why this fic won a competition, it's great. I think I've nailed my colours to the mast here, so all that remains to be said is: this fic is going in my favourites.

Author's Response: Absolutely HUGE SMILES!! :D That means so much to me!! I'm so glad you loved it! This was my very first story I completed and I'm very very pleased with the reaction it's gotten. Thank you sooo much for favoriting it! I still can't get over how many people actually want the story longer lol for a one shot it's really big. The good thing is, (if you liked Cora at all) that her story kind of continues in my Novel/novella length What Means Most. It's not strictly about her or even one particular character. Chapter 4 has her reappear :)
I'm absolutely touched, and thrilled you liked it so much. Thank you so much for the review! (I'll go read your response now lol)

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