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Review:fuzzylogic says:
Naww, that was sweet. I love how you've made this so original; it's going nice and slowly too. I hope the 'young man' gets the courage to talk to the girl soon :) Awaiting the next chapter excitedly!

Author's Response: 'Sweet' was what I was going for, so it's good that you thought it so!

It's nice to know that this hasn't bored you. I was initially really scared to post this because I thought it was a bit too abstract and too slow. But it just begged to be written down and I don't regret posting it all. It is reviews like this that give me the confidence to write more and I know that I made the right choice in posting. I'm glad I haven't lost you so far!

Our young man will speak to the girl soon. The girl is Molly II, by the way. It isn't mentioned anywhere but in the summary. But you are allowed to believe she is whoever you wish her to be. She is Molly II in my head. I also have first names for the young man and the barista but I have chosen not to disclose them. You can imagine them however you want.

The next chapter should be up in the next few weeks! It's about halfway done and I'll post it as soon as I am happy with it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!


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