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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Hi there!

Ok, I have to say that after one chapter I'm totally hooked ;) The idea behind this is a really interesting one - Purebloods as muggles and no memories? whoa - and having the trial at the start of this set the scene really well to show you how far they've been sent away from everything they know. Then, in comparison, it seems almost comical how unaware Astoria and Daphne are; unaware of their history, and who exactly they are meetin up with!

Draco was portrayed really well at the trial, he was acting like a true Malfoy but extremely scared. I felt so sorry for him when he was shouting for Blaise :( also very true to character when he bumped into Astoria! And Astoria is a really interesting character the way you've done her, with her dreamy state, and it all kind of hints that she has a slight feeling something's not right - you did that SO well!

I loved the description of Draco at the very start too; it really planted him straight into your head, and the trios of decriptions worked *really* well.

Overall, I LOVED it, and I really hope you work on this some more :) 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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