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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hey there, I'll have to come back to read the other chapters.

This was a very dramatic start to what I'm sure is going to be an interesting story! The emotion is very definite and comes out quite well in this Prologue.

I would go back and fix the spacing as well as the frequency of your commas. There's a bit of grammar to touch up as well (present tenses and singular/plural type things).

Also, is there a way to scale your banner a bit more? Like make it wider? It's just a bit squished.

I do have to say I like your feel for drama! :)


Author's Response: Thanks. I think you'll find the remaining chapters, with a bit mores suspense and surprise. As far as the space, well it wouldn't let me submit unless it was double spaced. lol. I'm going to touch up all my chapters. I have 6 total done, and working on #7. Thanks again.

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