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Review:silverstarletworld89 says:
Dude, this is sad!!Beautifully written, but very sad lol. I felt so much empathy for each character which is I guess what you wanted =p and is I think very hard to do, so Well done for that. I liked the limitations you gave to us reguarding the relationship of victorie/teddy and victorie/Scorpius because it kept me so intrigued that I kind of wish that this wasn't a one-shot lol. Your desciptions were wonderul, as where your little references to the sand and the afternoon dust, it just made everything flow and sound beautiful. You managed to get me feel sadness in such a few words. And because I can't really handle sad stories because I am such a sap, I am going to end on a high. Victorie is a TOTAL cougar =P and who can blame her, when such a dishy toy boy is on offer *swoons over Scorpius*

Great Story!

Author's Response: Aww thanks. This was my first real attempt at description-heavy writing :) It was a fun break! I suppose it's not entirely sad. I don't like to write entirely sad things. I think every character understood their situation and was ready to accept their fate.

Teehee, no one ever minds Rose/Teddy! xD That's even older! But yes, mmm Scorpius~

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