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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
That was adorable! I've always found it really hard to write about younger kids, because I always make them sound too mature, but I think you did it perfectly. You captured Ron's despair really well, and I think you did a great job overall with the characters. I'm partial to Fred and George, but I haven't seen a lot of stories like this, so brownie points for originality too. The only thing I have to say was that I predicted the end. Fred and George always have something to do with it, but that's just making them stay in character, so that's another good thing. Just a really cute one-shot! Great job!

Author's Response: Haha yeah, the end was kind of predictable. I tried to think of another way to do it, and have it be someone or something else but... Fred and George were just too perfect. I had the whole toe idea before F&G came into it ^.^

I'm glad you like it, and that you thought I wrote the kids well. I always feel wary writing younger characters too, because it's so EASY to make them too young or too old. I think part of the trick is not specifying their ages ;)

Thaaank you for the review :D

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